Monday, April 13, 2009

Loving Grace

As time passes slowly day by day
I become more desolate and unphased
Pondering over the thought of her loving grace
Trying hard not to follow her gaze
I am cursed like a demon with a tyrant spell that bounds me
Cold shadowy clouds surround me
Freezing violent winds ground me
There I am so alone yet the holy spirit guides me
I have no good soul I have no morals yet her love for me is pure and does not toil..
I watch as she stares at me with awe
Thinking that I am worth it all
As she reaches to give me a kiss
I get weary and hurt like a blowing hit…
Now as I lie here in my grave she sheds a heavy warm tear
As it falls on to my spirit the hurt pain and love go away…
Finally after so many years of pain I no longer walk astray..
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13 comments:

  1. JAZMINEApril 13, 2009 at 10:52 AM

    it was a nice poem good job

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  2. nancyApril 13, 2009 at 2:20 PM

    i like how your so discripted with your words
    your poem is really nice
    great job =]

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  3. kleverApril 14, 2009 at 9:35 AM

    good job

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  4. daliaApril 14, 2009 at 9:36 AM

    Its a reallly nice and kind of sad poem but good job....=]

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  5. JoseApril 14, 2009 at 10:05 AM

    GOOD POEM
    LIKE HOW U USE THE HOLY SPIRIT LOL
    GOOD JOB

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  6. loveableApril 14, 2009 at 10:06 AM

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  7. loveableApril 14, 2009 at 10:13 AM

    i love the poem it is really romantic who were u thinking of wen u wrote this poem

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  8. HONEyCOMBzApril 14, 2009 at 10:19 AM

    GOOD POEM iS NiCE KEEP UP THE GOOD WORk

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  9. LocoApril 14, 2009 at 10:20 AM

    I was thinking of you....:)

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  10. AnonymousApril 14, 2009 at 11:46 AM

    lolz i think i know who ur talkin about....but it's an awsome poem :D!

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  11. ElizabethApril 14, 2009 at 11:57 AM

    nice poem you use many really good words

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  12. AlexyApril 14, 2009 at 11:59 AM

    nice poem :] you really did put a lot of effort in this poem. keep up the good work

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  13. crystalApril 14, 2009 at 2:09 PM

    good job. :)

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